It wasn’t really much to look at yet — just a few pages of short sentences — but this is what ABC Books first saw of Rudie Nudie. 👇
I’ve received a lot of messages recently, asking for advice on how an author would present an idea for a picture book to an agent or publisher, and in particular whether to include illustration notes. So, (as promised) I thought it might be useful to show how I do it.
It’s the title and the story I want people to focus on, so for these I use clear, black typeface and all the other type is a pale grey or aqua colour. I want to make it easy for a commissioning editor to find my picture book text on the page, and read it. This sounds really obvious, but I make sure I don’t hide my story amongst a jumble of other words.
I tend to divide the text into double-page spreads, so the publisher can see how the book will flow, but not all authors do this. Rudie Nudie is a 24-page picture book, and you can see I’ve set aside the first three pages for the half title and title pages, so the text starts on page 4 (children's picture books are generally 24 or 32 pages long).
If I am intending to illustrate the book myself, I do often write a few illustration notes, using a paler, coloured type so they don’t jump out from the page at first glance. If the text is intended for another illustrator, I am careful not to include too many instructions — in fact only if the illustrative content is not evident in the story, or if the intention is for the illustrations to deliberately contradict the text. As an illustrator myself, I know I prefer to interpret the story myself without too many suggestions from the author at this early stage.
Good luck! Maybe you’ll find a different way to present your ideas, but hopefully seeing how I do it will give you a starting point. I wish you all the best for your adventures in picture books.
You can ask for Rudie Nudie in book stores, or order online at Booktopia
Read a little more about other authors' manuscripts, and the collaborative process between picture book creators and editors in my interview with Creative Kids Tales
Take a peek behind the scenes at the illustrations in progress for Rudie Nudie on the ILLUSTRATING page
Please feel free to ask any questions in the comments below, or by emailing me via the CONTACT page